Cleaned up language in Specifications #69
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Broke up run on sentence to be more readable. Fixed pluralization noun verb agreement.
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@Brianthered thanks for the PR. Will take a look and see about applying them where appropriate! |
lrosenthol
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| C2PA specifications SHOULD NOT provide value judgments about whether a given set of provenance data is 'good' or 'bad,' merely whether the assertions included within can be validated as associated with the underlying asset, correctly formed, and free from tampering. | ||
| C2PA specifications SHOULD NOT provide value judgments about whether a given set of provenance data is 'good' or 'bad'. The assertions can be: validated as associated with the underlying asset, can be correctly formed, and are free from tampering. |
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I prefer the current text - what is the concern here?
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| <p>Content Credentials also refers to the overall C2PA technology, and is therefore essentially treated as a plural noun. If a <a href="#_c2pa_manifest">C2PA Manifest</a> is a Content Credential, then multiple <a href="#_c2pa_manifest">C2PA Manifest</a> or the broader, universal concept is Content Credentials.</p> | ||
| <p>Content Credentials can also refer to the overall C2PA technology. If a <a href="#_c2pa_manifest">C2PA Manifest</a> is a Content Credential, then multiple <a href="#_c2pa_manifest">C2PA Manifests</a> or the universally aggreated concepts are Content Credentials.</p> |
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Content Credentials ALWAYS refers to the technology - can implies a choice. Also, the grammar is important about the plural noun
What are your concerns with this text?
stonigrl
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Doing initial read through of the specifications in v 2.1.
Broke up run on sentence to be more readable.
Fixed pluralization noun verb agreement.