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C2PA specifications SHOULD NOT provide value judgments about whether a given set of provenance data is 'good' or 'bad,' merely whether the assertions included within can be validated as associated with the underlying asset, correctly formed, and free from tampering.
C2PA specifications SHOULD NOT provide value judgments about whether a given set of provenance data is 'good' or 'bad'. The assertions can be: validated as associated with the underlying asset, can be correctly formed, and are free from tampering.
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I prefer the current text - what is the concern here?

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<p>This is the preferred, non-technical, term for a <a href="#_c2pa_manifest">C2PA Manifest</a>. The <a href="#_c2pa_manifest_store">C2PA Manifest Store</a> therefore represents the Content Credentials of an asset.</p>
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<p>Content Credentials also refers to the overall C2PA technology, and is therefore essentially treated as a plural noun. If a <a href="#_c2pa_manifest">C2PA Manifest</a> is a Content Credential, then multiple <a href="#_c2pa_manifest">C2PA Manifest</a> or the broader, universal concept is Content Credentials.</p>
<p>Content Credentials can also refer to the overall C2PA technology. If a <a href="#_c2pa_manifest">C2PA Manifest</a> is a Content Credential, then multiple <a href="#_c2pa_manifest">C2PA Manifests</a> or the universally aggreated concepts are Content Credentials.</p>
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Content Credentials ALWAYS refers to the technology - can implies a choice. Also, the grammar is important about the plural noun

What are your concerns with this text?

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